Comments : Unanswered Questions

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good one, i like it a lot my fav part is "This is not a dream,
    This is not a fantasy,
    This is not an illusion.
    I am trapped in reality.
    Cold, heartless, dark, reality."
    for not rhyming you did a great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Usually i don't really like poems that don't rhyme... but this one is an exception. i really liked it, and i know what you're saying. it would be nice if it were all just a dream ey?
    take care, xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Excellent topic M'Dear!

    There were some times when the formation was a bit off, but it was still an very god read.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOW! Great job! Keep up the great work! I loved reading your poetry. :o)

    Michelle