Oh! thats so cute! u dont even know! who ever ur chik is..damn she's lucky to have a boi like you. dang

Beautifil poem, i liked it alot...
It's really sweet, nice use of words, good flow.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Wonderful work! i read your post, and thought i'd check ur stuff out. glad i did. this poem is beutiful

Ruby

Nice write.