Comments : This time you crossed the line

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Aww i hope that didnt really happen, if it did im so sorry!! beautifully done though, its a really touching poem... well done! 5/5 love becky xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Blaine

    That was written in a way that anybody could and should understand keep your head what doesnt kill you makes you stronger

  • 18 years ago

    by emily

    Thank you so much for the comments. they really mean alot.