Comments : Need To Be In Your Embraces

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    And the rays that stream into my heart,
    fall into each of these lines.
    my favorite lines! well written, sad situation. I'm sowwie :(

  • 18 years ago

    by *~CaSsYa~*

    Beautiful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Brilliance!
    I liked the last stanza particularly. 5/5.