Wow-this is really good...you obviously have talent!

october xx

Another great poem by you, very well written

Awh! This was sad. As I was reading it, it kinda seemed like lyrics.. I just think this poem would be great as a song.

Anyways.. Lovely job again. The emotions in this piece were great, and they poured out as I read on. It was amazing. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great poem :D Yea, I think it would make a great song! , but still a lovely poem! With great emotion and words! :D