Hey Hun
Wonderful poem, i love it, youve reall grown hun, you dont need me anymore!:P keep it up and let you heart guide you

Love Jenn

I did like this poem it was good and you don't need to change it

Hey hunn.
it was awesome! the only thing i saw was a spelling mistake! (I Love you.......
Cause you don't care that I'm mot just like you)
other than that it was perfect!! i think it had the right flow.. i can relate too this kid i really really like and so close to going out with.. he was like yeah my weekend is gonna be busy.. im like yeah mines gonna be empty he goes then lets do something.. i was like okay.. im so excited!! :D
love lenee

Yeah...it's very nice...has the right flow...very deep...full of emotion...nice one girl...