BRILLIANT!!! i LOVE IT!!! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD I LIKE THE FACT THAT IT RHYMES SO WELL AND ALL GOES TOGETHER SO NICELY..GOOD JOB

That was ...wow. It was just so fluent and it just came together so well. Every part of it meant something and it made it terrific

Luv Chan

Wow, I am yet again awed by your talent for letting out your emotions through your poetry. You have a gift for it, one many people would do anything to have. Keep writing and best wishes.
*VioletRaven*

Another wonderful read, well done fine poet. beautiful.

Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit