Comments : The depth of winter.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... im speechless... wow...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I love the winter :). it's pretty but i do have to complain about the cold that's the only part i would have to complain about. as long as chirstmas and my birthday have snow i'm happy that's all that i require. well dont even though this is like what seem against winter. i love the title though.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Steve,

    Truly magnificent! A vivid picture of winter has been imprinted in my mind. I'm shivering :P

    Simon

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    A very good poem indeed! You have captured the nature of winter: the wind, the cold, the snow. Your use of imagery is beautiful. I can only say that, as always, this is a great work of art. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    Great poem, nicely written throughout!

    Keep 'Em Coming

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Retsal

    I'm in love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Steven ...
    Your words captured the winter season so well ...

    Soon a white blanket to cover all,
    bringing the stillness and quiet of deep winter.
    The barren and stark landscape,
    bare trees with branches like disfigured limbs

    I must say this is the stanza I loved the most ...
    A very visual piece drawn in my mind ...
    Beautiful write , my friend

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I love winter!! you described it beyond words...excellent, excellent job. so beautiful. no other words can explain it. captivating write!