Again...its very good...
5/5 sweety....

take care

That was a little confusing personally even though the writing was good, i just think you need to explain more by adding another stanza explaining what's happening in the first 1. Hope that makes sense:) You can PM if not! Good write tho!
*x*ShadowedPhoenix*x*

Good poem.I like the whole rythem of the poem.

OoO.I love this poem.Short.But oh so wonderful.Keep it goin'

The writting is great, but i agree with shadowedphoenix about adding another stanza to make it clearer

Good poem. It has a good rhyme scheme. Keep it up.

I really liked it.Very deep!

Simple and sweet good job