Nice one..
i liked it alot..
esp ''I freeze within,
Darkness envelops me,
As I slip from this world,
Frozen deep within''
And thanks for ur comment on my poem it meant alot to me=)
k keep writting!!

Wow, you just never fails to amaze me. I'm deeply addicted to your poems. I love the words you used to describe the emotions. Your poems are pretty much to the dark side, at least to me, and I really like it alot.

'A crimson river leaves me'

Nice one. =)

I can only agree with the others! Excellent =)