WOW VERY GOOD DIFFERENT FOR A CHANGE THATS WHY I LIKE IT KEEP IT UP!

Very good, i liked it.
I like the idea of using a lot of speech, it's different.
You've written this well, 5/5

xxx cici xxx

I really like it and it is very different great job
Jennifer

Hey russell yea i really liked it and yea it is different. keep it up hun!!! kayla

Yeah, definitely belongs in the "Dark Poems" section.

But I liked it. :) A lot. You are pretty darn good for being young. ;)

I have a poem thats kinda similar about "my demons" but yea thx for taking the time to read my poem
keep it up

~natalie~

Once again, another amazing poem! great job! i noticed you dont have many love poems, i myself enjoy reading love poems, you should write a few more, let me know if you do i would love to r/r/c them!

**meggie**