'you gentle touch'
'you caring voice'
Is it supposed to be 'your'?

I like the shortness of this poem. It's simple, the words are easy, yet it says alot. Deep with emotions that is. I really enjoyed this. How each verse continues to the other, keeps the emotions rolling along. Nice write! =D

It hurts very much if someone left us...I know that feeling...cause apparently...the friend that I was mad left the state without saying goodbye 2 me...and I miss him very much...