Comments : A kid's life

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey hun,
    awww.....i like this...i wish i could undo some things lately...gosh doesn't everyone....
    i also like that its not ur normal kind of style or voice or something...idk...u just sound different....very nostalgic...like something very bad has happened and u r looking towards the past for help when u should be looking to the future.....u ok?
    or maybe im just reading into it too much...hey, i loved ur work as always
    keep it up, i love reading them
    xoxo~*rachel*

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Haha of course i am alright, but I don't believe a writer should confine himself to one style...explore a little you'll surprise yourself.

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    Someone who finally read my mind. lol. but honestly, back in the days of pure innocence the world was still alright.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by Yep thats him

    I think that poem should go in the life society section because thats what life is

  • Interesting poem... lol its v true i would have to agree with you too
    ~courtie