I like this poem! I really think it's great, but the last line, i kinda thought was a little wierd. That's just my opinion though. But this really is a nice poem. '.~

I like your poem cuz i know how you feel except in a different way! i thought he cared when he really didn't and i thought IT ment something to him when it didn't! i know this doesn't pertain to your poem but yeah good work and keep it up