Comments : Forever Changed

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    I verily enjoyed this poem Bill. I must say this touched in ways that few literary pieces have, and I am indeed awed by the way you handle diction and structure to convey meaning. Very well done on an excellent work of art!

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Did you write this poem for the Delaware incident Bob was babbling on about?

    Anyway, very nicely done, especially the last stanza.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Bill....touching piece.....truly spoken from the heart....

  • 18 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    I loved ur poem. its so deep. i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Ty for sharing with us.. a hard thing to do at times.. beautifully written.