Comments : Only If

  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    WOW LEWI!!assirrpagta!!!
    nutaan atem!!!
    quyanaqvall icug??
    i know i can t spell goo din yupik but still you know what i said big bro!

  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    Wow, I really REALLy like this one. I don't know if your suicidal or if those days have come where you heard somebody died and wished maybe that could have been you... but somedays I feel like I could die...a lot of days actually. And I've read a lot of suicidal or just flat out deathtaking poems that were awsome. Like this one here. Great write. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    Pretty intense poem.. and well written. 5/5 I like.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jade Eyes

    Hey remember me?...we chatted 4 a lil bit and I was stuck @ home sick...well if you dunt thas okay...i likes your poem...ppl may say u r suicidal...i say thats the best way u can explain how u feel inside...LET OUT!!!!!...when we go skydiving(just use yer imagination...pretend we do go skydiving 2gether)...scream it @ the top of yer lungs...then u'll feel better...LOL...that or scream it from the top of a mountain....check out my poems...i added a new 1..i like this poem...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SamanthaRose X3

    Aww i like this one. sad, but good

  • Nice pome is is cute

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Good poem very well written