That's a really nice loving poem!! 5
-Kristin

I love this poem, it shows so much emotion, so much feeling and it is so sweet.
Keep up the good work
Tara xxx

Short and sweet detailed enough to send the importance of the person.

however the "In it" all by itself on a line seemed akward at first but thinking back it works well but when i read it i just confused me because i missed what "it" (life) was

the Thank You at the end was a interesting ending normally something so short doesn't close very well but i loved this ending