Wow that was awesome! it flowed really well and yeah it was just great! :)

I really enjoyed this as well.
I thought it was very creative and unique.
Well written, good flow and wording.
Another excellent write from you.

I enjoyed reading this piece. The repetition of the first line added something special. I like the rhyming, and the way it was written; very well. You did a good job on this.

5/5

-Briana