Wow, that's a long poem, but it was worth the read. That's awesome man, very good stuff. It makes a really nice story. Keep it up dude, you have a lot of talent.

Did this really happen???? If so, I'm so sorry for your loss ....

((((Big hugs)))))

Michelle

Gr8 poem. i luvd it, best 1 yet, 5/5 for SURE!
~*Who Cares?*~

Woah. At the beginning - I thought it may turn out a little childish if I'm honest. 'I drive in my car' isn't the most stirking line after all. However the more you read - the more the poem plays out the story and becomes an incredibly sad and meaningful poem. Excellent writing.

Peace. [Sole]