Hey, good job with your I like it,It kinda express the power of love and what it can do

Good way to build the suspense in it

Wow very good. All those questions are true in about everybodys life I think...but good poem in the end.

Very good! i think a lot of ppl feel this way at some point in time. 5/5

I really like how u put this poem!

Gd