Comments : Story of the Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Loved it as alowys

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Thank you for the comment on mine and that how i feal when my friends are not around it feals like there not there and i dont seem to care but ohh well mabey i am reading to deep into them

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Hmm...now that was a little different. That was okay but the third stanza kinda threw the rythym off. But the words were cool.
    ~Faith