I love this piece!! :) It had my emotions running wild and almost had me in tears! Weldone hun, Tess xo

Nice poem!! Good job!

Wow. And you don't like this poem you wrote? Are you crazy? It's beautiful! I really really enjoyed reading this. And the rhymes aren't simple at all. Something like *me-free* would be simple, but it's not like that at all!

Mine are always simple haha, I'm trying to improve my english, which is pretty hard when you are talking dutch all day haha. Anyway.. off-topic, sorry. Also thanks for your comment on my poem, it really meant a lot for me, cause you are very inspiring for me! EXCELLENT!

Awesome poem hun, as usual.
i gotta say this bit stood out for me the most:
When talking just wont help
And you dont have energy to bleed
How can you light up the darkness?
Without losing what you need

god all of it is so incredibly true...awesome work xoxox

Brilliant poem.

Jamie, another great one, personally I like this one more then the other one I commented on, but in all, your poems are great. The rhymes were simple, but the flow was perfect... FROM ONE POET TO ANOTHER: It isn't how well a poem rhymes or how it fits together, it the emotion that is expressed...as long as you are truly showing how you feel, its an Amazing Poem!

XOXO
Kayla