You're very descriptive!!! It was a wonderful poem. 5/5

This is a very beautiful poem Silver ...

I shall sit with them and rest.
Rest my eyes, my body;
rest my soul.
I shall join those perfect trails in the ground
that gives the strength to grow.
I shall lie in the sweet perfumed bed
of Red Roses and rest.

I really enjoyed reading this part the best ..Through your detail and description you can almost smell these roses ...Truly a beautiful piece...

I do not mean to offend, but I must critique; and, I must praise as well! The poem is truly deep and inspiring. You were great detail places the reader in the scene you have described -- however, be more creative with your speech and vocabulary -- changing a word that everyone uses in everyday speech to a more creative word can make a lot of difference! I have added you to my favorites and I hope you will do the same for me and vote on and critique of my work

Nicelly written, really descriptive. 5/5

Beautiful place, Silver, and I wish I could describe as well as you do and have emotions run as deep. You have such a talent and I wish I could one day have just part of the talent that you have.