Comments : I Lost You... Foreve

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow hunny..
    this is such a beautiful poem..
    its one of the best i've read.. its sooo good.. i love it..
    much love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammy

    Amed- I loved this poem. Lots of emotion in this one. Good job.
    Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really liked this poem... it is beautiful and emotional.. the only suggestions i have for you is to watch your spelling.. there was a handful of misspelled words and also make sure if you want your poem to rhyme dont force it... let it come naturally... other than the the stroy was amazing and well thought out... keep it up... you are very talented and have me now very impressed...

    sammie