Thats so sad... i hope ur ok... thats how i feel a lot but its toward both my parents, not just one. they just forgot about me after a while. i'm just their little doll that they can hurt, torture and yell at.... :(

That was areaaly good poem yet really sad. i hope that you are ok and remember to keep smiling no matter what.

O wow sweetie. That is really sad. And you can depend on people. It just takes a lot of trust. I hope you and your dad can work everything out. Check out some of my other poems. And thanks for the comment

Hey i thought that poem was good. and you do have a point. if you can trust him then who are you suppose to trust?

I loved ur peom tahnk u for ur comment on mine

That is a really awsome poem you are a great writer i can also apply that to my life to so keep up the wonderful writing

I like it, how you are so discritive, and it draws feeling from all th readers, i read some of the other comments lol. But i love how it, is discritive as thoughts, to feeling, and i cant help but feel when i read the poem. So yeah i cant help but say as well Its Really good lol. comment me more sometime and thanks

Your a good peomm writer keep writin and thanks for the comment

Awwww....that was so sad. I can almost relate. I hate my "father" though...I can't say I even love him. And thank you very much for your comment, vote, and time on my poem. That meant the world to me. I will read more of your poems (I'll try to read and vote on them all.) I just wanted to let you know that I would return the favor and I honestly appreciated your time. I will read them here soon. Once again, thank you.

Wow this is great...5/5....makes me feel like cryin...*tear* ='(

No matter what this life brings to you, you should always have hope, and always learn how to keep your head up-that's what keeps me going, alive and well...it is knowing there is a greater plan, and if our family isn't the people we depend on, then, we should learn how to depend on only us, and have hope that as we go on in life, we will come across good godly people who we will trust to help guide us and be there for us when we most need them.

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and commenting on it...it meant a lot. God Bless...Happy ThanksGiving!

Libby

Thanks for the mess everyone but for the record i have never been the one to make someone not trust me. Its been the other way around, and that poem is about how my boyfriend feels about what he did.

Hi! really awesome

Completely from my point of view that was totally understandable. ive been there. and i know what it feels like and i still haven't found an explination for it. but i know that my father loves me and hes just trying his best. they can't understand everthing about you and they try to give you comfort often i pushed it away. they think punishment may be the way to handle the situation. but really it just makes it worse. i can't explain it. and why it is that way but don't hate your father for it im sure he is trying his best.
if you need someone to talk to give me an email and i will be sure to reply.
hope you understand where im coming from.

This poem is wonderful! It describes what my dad did to me. He was a jerk and left me and my mom and my sister and never cared! I love your writing keep it up! And thanks for the review!

Hey it's cool.. seriously... simple but reach to heart.... i aint know wha he has done to ya but if ur dad hurts ya and couldnt protect ya, then really i dont know how u r able to trust guys...

i luv my dad alot... we used to hardly talk for like 17 years, but now we are close.... luv him 2pieces bcos he is wha make me alive...!

Keep up the good poem and keep writing.. write whateva ya feel like it, aint care whether other luv./hate it as long it makes ya happy and feel a bit relax =) *huggles*!

Wow you asked me to comment on one of your poems so i am that is beautiful and i can relate to it 100%

Great poem, I can relate to your poem.

Hey i love this poem oh my god i can relate to it really well thats kinda how my dad is although i don't really call him that anymore

Oh my god i love your poem i know what you feel i go theough the same with my dad please check out mine when you have the chance it's new