Comments : Poor Little Floor Title

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Lol

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Loved the metaphor. loves is kinda like a floor. never thought of it that way. beautiful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    YES! EXACTLY BEE! sometimes i feel like the floor tile. so i totally see what you are saying great poem!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hahaha........well i don't mean to laugh.....but under the sercomstances......well when i wrote this poem i was actually looking at a floor tile so it didn't have a meaning then.....or i should say.....it ddidn't until i relized that i had wrote it with out thinking.....and that those were my true feelings.....i'm a stange one i know.....gesh floor tiles...!!!!
    luv ya'lls lots
    Bee