Comments : Tragic Suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArStAiNeDfAcE*

    He is listening keep talking to him and letting him in. He will answer your prayers but maybe not in your own way. Remmeber his way is higher than are's and it is always right in the end. I use to pray for him to let me die and now he has answered it in his own way and has toally given me a passion for life. I have no doubt he has a plan for you and me. Let him do his work. Give him a chance because he will never disppoint you. He promises that as well as I do. Hang in there!

  • It was great I loved it. Your really good at writing. It touched me very much. It even made me shed a tear(which I don't do very much)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg...you are a truly gifted writer..just omg!!!
    really great poem but such a depressing story...
    wow...lol...
    take care of urself
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sillylittlegirl

    I love it...the words r so deep...keep it up...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The B3autiful struggle

    Damn you got some talent, I almost cried.Good Rhyming.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lalala

    Brill poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lalala

    Loved the poem 5/5 keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Me

    Omg. that was such a great poem it realli spoke to me u are sooo tallented and i hope u continue to write more perfect poems like this.

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Oh my dear lord in heaven. . .this is the perfect suicide poem. . of course suicide isn't the answer it's just they rhyme scheme that you have done and the words that you've used. . .it's just AMAZING! i love it. . .i could actually feel his pain and his sadness and what all he's been through. . .it's just. . .wow. . . i'm speechless (that never happens to me) your amazing
    check out my work sometime. . it's not anything like this but hey it's poetry lol
    thanks,
    ~*~Amber~*~ (lifetimecowgirl)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashly

    Ur addicting i cant stop reading your poems. they are so true and heart felt.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misunderstood Misery

    Omgsh...i cant discribe how i feel about this poem..i started to cry...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Vicki

    Omg that was amazing!!! i got chills i have had experience with suicide and attempts and everything and this poem wow i could really connect, strong emotions!!

    it was very well written GREAT JOB!!!