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  • 19 years ago

    by cant sleep

    I like the way you expres things. but dang the syllables dont match very well. dont get me wrong, its good, but i dunno. some lines have rhythm. some dont. then i get all discombobulated (hehehe) and forget about meaning, and think about syllables. its cool though. comment on some of mine! ~*nancy*~

  • 19 years ago

    by beautiful-angel

    This poem is pretty good keep on writing

  • 18 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    THATS AWSUM!

  • 18 years ago

    by Irena

    I love it, is soo real and deep in the same time.

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Really good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    Andrew that was an AWESOME poem i really feel that way too

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Excellent poem, keep up the good work my friend =D.

    Much love and God bless,
    FalLEn*-

  • 17 years ago

    by TearsInTheRain

    That really beautiful. =) xxxAidoxxx