Comments : Death To Be

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Something morbid and depressing.
    - Sophisticated in that "I hope you are okay" sort of way.

    Love heaps,
    Kalah.

    "I can see violets in your hair"
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    The speculative risk of suicide, its what forestalls any plan. That is any plan to end it all.

    The piece has a well defined outcry. It shows the side of a p1ssed off EpithetPoet. Who demands to know if Happiness or love does exist.

    Such questions become circular figure eights - never ending. I have yet to find my answers. But I always say ... Why do I linger on, to face an empty dawn?

    Maybe to stand strong, and live long? Or what? Living life should be a blessing, but why is it so? So like this?

    A deeply affective poem. Loved your message, your outcry, the confusion, the emotion especially.

    5/5

    *You never fail.