Hey Ato-chan. This really blossomed from the part you read me earlier! Great job! My favorite lines were:

"We don't have a lot of much,
But we have enough to get us by.
We have the richest thing of all,
Something that lives on once we die."

Awesome job lady!

~Anthony

We don't have a lot of much,
But we have enough to get us by.
We have the richest thing of all,
Something that lives on once we die

Atomic....You did an absolutely wonderful job with your topic .....

The stanza above I loved the most..
It just held so much meaning ..
Beautiful piece ...

Your rhymes are so good, I wish I could write like that. Your poetry has a really nice structure to it, all of my poems are different, and they are all over the place. I could never be consistant with my writing, which is sad. Oh well, maybe you can teach me to be good :P hehe

Excellent work...5/5
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