Comments : A Picnic To Remember

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    That was truly amazingly beautiful ...Ann
    God I can't wait for summer to come back around .....I love picnics ...
    Your first stanza really set the mood ...

    I think tomorrow night I will have a picnic under the soft gentle breeze
    * of my living room ceiling fan * with candles as my stars .....LMAO ....
    Then again romance is what you make it .... I really do miss summer's romantic picnics ....
    You really did kick
    butt with this one....
    I loved it !!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h w0w what a beautiful p0em. such t0uching lines. well d0ne! i really ;like it. me n harry went 0n 0ur picnic f0r 0ur 6 m0nths l0lz =) neway great j0b 0n this p0em!
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "We sat and reminisced
    For all the time we lost
    You always were my heart
    Regardless of what life tossed."

    love those lines! you did a great job with this topic, i thought it sounded hard. but you did a beautiful job with it! i like your writings

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    Aww that poem was so gorgeous. It was so cute and lovely, and it made me remember the Summer... :). Always a good thing! Anyway, I really liekd the poem. I thought it was very well written.

    Take Care, Elle x

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey ann, your work really inspires me. I hope i can write as good as you one day. It is such a beautifully written piece! :)