Dont listen to ibroke4u she dont know what she is talkin about your poems are awesome i liked it i cant wait to see what else u write.its great keep up the good work.

Good write, fair emotion, and the poem has meaning.

And i belive that makes all of them up too date, happy?

Very good poem....

::MELI::

Dum di dum dum......
That poem = really really good

Mattyomo

I think the repetition of every in the last two lines ruins it's impact . . . however, the rest of the poem is great, it really gets across your feeling of pain and rejection, being confused comes across as well. Nicely written.

Peace. [Sole]