Comments : Butterfly

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I like butterflies. they are awesome your poem is beautiful. the set up is nice the last four lines that you repeated actually worked well with ending this piece. well done!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    I loved these lines:
    It really looks paper-thin
    To see their real beauty
    You really have to look within.

    Excellent job. It was well written and welll expressed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Wow! I absolutely heart the topic!

    Who would have known...just wow!

    I see no error with this. =)

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    (")-(") Arrivederci!