I really like it, your way of writting is amazing, great job!

Megan, that poem was very very well written, its sometimes hard to conrtol the emotions and keep your topic straight in your poems and i do it all the time, but this poem is really good! i would use the "chorus" maybe evey second paragraph tho, the reader needs more time to filtrate the other wrting! I loved it meg, gave me shivers, hehe

Luv ya, Ash

Megan, that poem was very very well written, its sometimes hard to conrtol the emotions and keep your topic straight in your poems and i do it all the time, but this poem is really good! i would use the "chorus" maybe evey second paragraph tho, the reader needs more time to filtrate the other wrting! I loved it meg, gave me shivers, hehe

Luv ya, Ash

I like this poem a lot, the form you put it in adds to its affect, I rate it a 5,
but only becasue you express your emotions so well. And the fact that its good haha