Beautifully written and heartfelt. Great job.

Awww what a sad poem :'(
chin up champ :P
You write so well, it makes me smile.
"Blinking it away,
A single tear rolled down.
Hitting the heart at home,
Slowly it begins to drown."

awesome line. I don't usually comment on a stanza, but that was awesome. (reminds me of something I would say :P )

Oh wow atomic... I never knew this side of you. There are so many!! My favorite lines were
"The sorrows of yesterday,
Reflected brightly in its shine.
Its innocence and loneliness,
Became one as it entwine."

You did a great job with this poem. I great new twist on a universal theme!

~Anthony

Wonderful job, great rhymes! very soul touching poem

The sorrows of yesterday,
Reflected brightly in its shine.
Its innocence and loneliness,
Became one as it entwine.

Woooow!! My gawsh hunn[y].. Awesome job! Thanks for all the comments, BTW. I give you a big 5/5.. *applauds* keep up the good work..Nd kepp yah head up..you'll get through :):)

``~.:Shanna

Woah. That was really good. It was so unique. Something about it i havent seen on this site before. The words are in harmony with each other and it sounds so beautiful! Great job!!!

Atomic, thai was filled with such tremendous emotion and so well written. Good job!

Warmest regards,

Steve

Posture broken down,
Emotionally torn apart.

for some reason i just really like the useage of the word posture, and in fact, i like a lot of ur word choices, which ive always found important in poetry. keep up the good work.

Wow...amazing!!! you're extremely talented. keep it up.
-xXx-

Beautifully written and so heartfelt....

Love Ann

Omfg so good.

Atomic ...
A truly touching poem ..
Such an emotional piece ..
Beautiful job as always ....

I loved it b/c i know what u mean and i so relate to it!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent poem.

Very well written, beautiful and yet sad. You have a true talent; I look forward to reading more of your poetry, as I am now hooked. Take Care! Brooke~

WOW! What else can i say other then it was great!

Very good....i liek it!-xxx-

This is fantastic . I know the feeling . I only wish the words would come to me as they do you .

P.S. please check out my poetry .

Great poem!!!5/5

Sad and heartfelt. The words you chose are totally amazing and its all put together so beautifully.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela