Comments : Someone

  • 20 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Wow, i see where this is headed. it had a really good line of thought behind it but the first and second stsanza didn't flow really nicely. great work thoguh. rock on, man. hardcore
    -Suzie

  • 20 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem can feel where you going with it
    keep writeing
    you got sum good talant

  • 20 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    This is a comment

    Thankyou for your time
    Matt

  • 20 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Im sorry
    I really am
    I wish i hDNT BEEN SO STUPID
    sorry i cant spell
    sorry sorry sorry
    I miss you
    sorry

  • 20 years ago

    by aliiiii

    Thats really great...really. 5/5. I hope everything is okay?