Comments : It's my life that been in vain

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    This is very good. the rhymes flow and dont seem forced, and the actual content its self is very deep.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I really like the poem. It has a good rhyme scheme. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by x-Beth-x

    - SHORT BUT VERY GOOD. I LIKE IT !!! KEEP IT UP !!! I EXPECIALLY LIKE IT CUZ I'VE BEEN IN THAT STATE OF MIND MANY TIMES B4. ROCK ON !!! WEEE :)

    -♥-Anarchy-♥-

    I ♥ CEREAL

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good flow and rhyms and the content is also great

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I kno wat u mean...wow gr8 poem...showed a lotta emmotion...thnx 4 replyin 2 my post...n im gunna read a couple more of ur even if u only gave me this 1...5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Wolf

    Good Poem,pretty dark and depressive
    Good choice of the words,simple and straight

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved it. my favorite part
    "I hate the world around me,
    and I hate what I've become,
    a creature without feeling,"
    it is so true. i loved it so much feeling
    great write.
    Emma 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    REALY LIKE THIS, ITS JUST LIKE SUM OF MY POEMS

  • 15 years ago

    by panicked life

    Awesome poem, crazy that a lot of people relate to it, nice flow and choice of words, keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    I realy like your style or writing