Truly amazing poem
Sets your heart racing whilst reading it...keep up the good work id like to hear more...
Your rhyming scheme is a nice change too throughout
good work
all the best
emily xxx

Wow tht was really intimate and descriptive. i liked it. the rhyming was really, very good. 5/5
becca x

Man, i wish i were that girl kssing u, u really turned me on with that poem! add pics and make this even more exciting!!!!!! LOL, i love it.

Wow... I LOVED IT!!! COMPLETELY!!!

OH MY GOD!!! Can you say "orgasmically good"? Well I WAS straight but with that poem...i'm not so sure.lol..It really was a great poem(nice rhythem)

That really turned me on. Literally. Loved it.

Very sexy!! like it!!!

That was so good. You so turned me on.

WWOOWW!! that was awesome it really got my heart racing see my gf use to do stuff like that for me but i just recently got dumped so well yea keep up the good work!!!!

That was HOTT! i loved it. good work.xoxo

I'm a lesbian. that was amazzing----im so horny now....

Im sooo wet!!! thnx ;)

Loved it i wish i had a girl like that

Amazing! Very well done...