Beth you are the bestest writer!!! lol and this poem is just crazy good. I feel so bad about you and gavin, but maybe he'll realize it was a mistake. You never know. Well keep writing!! love always, Audrey

This was really good, i loved it cause i can really relate to this a lot

Every day when you see those smiles,
See me laugh,
Remember it's all fake,
I was led down an imaginary path,

that was my favorite line but really this entire poem was amazing...really everything flowed perfect and every rhyme was right on never off 5/5

Another excellent poem
well done
you are an excellent writer
xoxoxox
~*MaRy*~

Thanx for the comment I feel the same way like I'm forced to fake happieness 5/5 comment back

You have the best poem ever :) i'm not lying i love this poem it has so many multi feelings to it

Wow... this poem is one that you can really dig deep into... its amazing... i think almost everyone can relate to it and can say wow... she took the words right out of my mouth and wrote them beautifully in this poem... excellent job!! this poem definetly deserves a five out of five...

sammie

Sorry it took so long for me to comment! =( Anyways, Gavin's stupid for ever letting you go. And I can relate to this poem. I Feel The same way about Jake...=(... I Love this poem. It's Awesome! LyLaS! Keep The Poems Comin'! =)
xoxoxo
~Sandra