Comments : My first Kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Val*~

    Thats sad. But that was a very good poem. I like it . It shows your feelings and emotions.
    *val

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess Beautifully Broken

    What an amzing poem. So sad but so...so uplifting at the same time. I dunno if tat makes any sense whatsoever, but u should definitly keep writing. u have a Gift!
    ~*tess*~