Whoa!!! i like it!! haha ttyl brad!
Amanda

Im not really into very long poems, but I read this three times...It was beautiful. Diction flawless. very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

You have a very graceful style of writing, I look forward to reading more from you.

Thank you for your comments. when you get chance please check out my latest poem "Love and War" let me know your opinion.

Kind regards
Hayley

Aww..thanks for the comment brad!!
Amanda