WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

Too good

So sad! I have a suggestion, you could change the line

So you said your bye byes

to

So you said your goodbyes

It makes it a little less informal - and slightly more sincere.

Peace. [Sole]

This 1's good i like the middle bit the best but all of it is really good
lv claire
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This 1's good i like the middle bit the best but all of it is really good
lv claire
xxxxx