Comments : Psychopathic Path (verse 1)

  • 18 years ago

    by sexy emmsy

    Hey thats kl bit confusing but i like it lol

    ttyl bbz, xxxemxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    One word only defines this poem...WOW! You have really captured everything to set an atmosphere of depression, and have explained all the feelings your clutching through the use of emotive language. Excellent effort, well done :).

    Much love and God bless,
    FalLen*-

    P.S: *Homicidal masquerades capturing blank souls/ Crucified definitely for the knowledge he knows/ Staring blankly in the blank air that he beholds*- beautifully written I must say :D.