I really liked this poem because its different and unique... its more real then some poems and you should definetly keep it up... i cant wait to read more... it was excellent!

sammie

Wow this poem is so real, so true and youve expressed it so well its sad but also with a sweet ending well done xxALLYxx

Wow this poem is so real, so true and youve expressed it so well its sad but also with a sweet ending well done xxALLYxx

It's difficult to comment on a poem that is as personal as this...
The flow was excellent and the rhyming as well. I can relate 100% to being betrayed and so the poem touched me deeply.
Sadly so, we cannot find love or friendship without trust and to find it abused by those who outsmart us is so very painful.
I hope the pain will eventually subside.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid