Comments : Forgotten child

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey if this is true it is so sad hope youre ok...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    "I'm a lost art
    I'm a broken heart
    I'm pieces apart
    I'm the forgotten child, remembering all the pain"

    You really have a way with words, very powerful.

    I've got to say though, I'm kind of worried about you. You have several recent sad poems. I read your "Live the lie" poem, and I hope there's no truth to what it said at the end. I'm hoping it was out of anger you wrote it, and didn't mean it.

    Although you probably hear this all the time, if you ever need to talk just send me a message. And really, be smart.
    ~Jaime