Interesting... this poem was really freaky.. but I liked it anyway. Nice work..

WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

I really don't know where to begin on this. I guess I'll start with the imagery. It's spine tingling. The way you described each movement....just wow! Next to the flow, very nice. It didn't break at all. Finally to the actual content, very well expressed. I also admire the intriguing title. Overall, very awesome! Take care~Holly