WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

I really like how you express your concern for everything and it seems that you just want to make the world a better place and its good to see that someon want to! keep up the good work

Hey steph, its ashley! like. willis, lol! its was good! this is sherrer right?

Nice poem. Very beautiful. I

read this, and I began to wonder.. I stared.. And I was sinking away in my thoughts. There is a lot behind this poem, which I like.

Tp me A poem is good when it "stops" me and gives me time to think about it. And that's what this poem does.

Though I always think I'm worse them my neigbor hehe. EXCELLENT!

Nice...u sure r a good advicer...people should listen 2 u...very good...u gives people inspiration...

Great poem!

-Taylor

Wow Steph.. you have a way of making people think harder about what they do and act.. it's amazing! Like all your poems!
By the way..
"Stop being obsessed
By the way your hair looks or the way you're dressed
Take some of that makeup off and be true
Let the real you shine through"

It kinda makes me think of Aurélie.. 8)
Love ya lots, Laura

And for those of you who use drugs,
To get away from lifes lil tugs,
Just remmeber that if you write,
You'll feel somesort of love in your life.

*clap* *clap*

I love this one too.. awesome :)