Great Job!! Very nicely written, i am not sure if the way you wrote this poem is good or not but i am sure of one thing and that is...every word you wrote here is something that came right out of your heart and thats what carries value...so keep it up and all the best...Nitin Mongia

Very good and I can relate to this been throught it and it still hurts but we r now friends keep up the good work 5/5