Comments : Here I Lay

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Why, this was so sad. was it true?
    I hope not.
    the ending was very good:
    I cried a river for you, a river that will never be seen
    All because you never knew
    I truly do love you

    you're a great poet.
    have a great day,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, I just remembered what you said:
    i am in a very happy relationship.

    I'm happy that this poem is not true.
    much love,
    marjan