I lovede this poem for so many reasons
All the words were placed in all the right places all the time
and it kept me interested
not that any of your others dont
Im gonna miss you suzie
:(

This is an amazing poem, I love the dark images and it flowed so well, there was a real feeling of anger behind it. Great write, Hope to see more in this genre, cause you do them so well.
*VioletRaven*

I have added you to my favorites. ages ago! great poem by the way

ruby

This is one of your strongest poems so far
Its really good
I love your imagery once again
keep it up
emily
xxx

I just have to say,that poem was amazing,i've never read anything like that before..it's just like..WOW lol.but really,great job! =)

Hmmmmm, The Apocolypse maybe....
Great work

Matt

Commenting again!!! i didnt do it justice. it captures the futility of war so well. it is such a visual poem. the language used is brillient. exellent work as usual. u have got so much talent, dotn let it go to wast

Ruby

U described the cruelty of war perfectly, i loved the imagery and dark scent of the poem, very well written. very strong poem, it kept me reading until the end.

adios

pili

Brilliant poem, very powerful.

i do think, however, that the 5th stanza let it down slightly, but that is just my opinion.

overall a great poem

That was a very powerful and amazing poem! Nice job!! I loved it!! keep it up!

"Horses with white main" = "Mane"

But the rest of the poem was (as i've said before) Excellent!
You have such a knack of creating a rhythm that allows the poem to flow like water
Kudos m'dear, you have amazing talent!
5/5
*gem*